better.coming along.font choices stronger.layout more interesting.use of white space versus density good.much better.add in your annotations--little text blocks that say something about the verbiage, or your hot process...anything.enough so it's clear you're able to choose and use text type well.g.
annotations as in very narrow rag right columns of serif text type.don't over do it.one or two per page about an inch to an inch and a half deep.g.
much progress since your start keep up tthe playfull interactions o the characters
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here is the complete version of my specimen book.
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better.
coming along.
font choices stronger.
layout more interesting.
use of white space versus density good.
much better.
add in your annotations--
little text blocks that say something about the verbiage, or your hot process...
anything.
enough so it's clear you're able to choose and use text type well.
g.
annotations as in very narrow rag right columns of serif text type.
don't over do it.
one or two per page about an inch to an inch and a half deep.
g.
much progress since your start keep up tthe playfull interactions o the characters
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